Talk:Welcome Meeting/@comment-36631818-20181103150208

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Original: “This is Fawn,” Fantasy says, introducing you.

Commentary: The “introducing you” does not really flow well, and sounds a little off.

Edit: //Cut out mentions of Fawn before//

“This is Fawn,” Fantasy says, gesturing towards a nearby dragon with brown scales and spotty white freckles.

//Had Fawn turn to greet newcomer//